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lipstick stains on my coffee cup
from a process of thought
as the coffee runs cold
from each sip from these poisoned cold lips

each sip hesitates
a slight procrastination
to avoid the topic of thought
to avoid the cold taste
to avoid the long nothingness of a new day
allowing my thoughts to flow out the window in to the sound of rush hour...
just random stuff about my situation I am in...

just jobless, broke, in debt.. and might not be able to afford my dreams..
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NervPoison Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
Nothing is impossible except with zero tries, as they say, but I guess cheap one-liners won't help your cause. I liked the poem, heavy subject matter notwithstanding, and I hope that better years lie ahead for you.
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ElderBlake Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Keep on dreaming, you will hardly be happier after your dreams have come true and your accepted reality.
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beyondimpression Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Professional Photographer
i need to accept reality... I am still in a teenage dream even though I am 19..
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ElderBlake Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
That is true, but never forget to keep dreams. Only the struggling one will be happy in the end. You are a carving mason as well. If you want to know what I mean by that you might want to take a look into my gallery.
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